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This thread is for comments and feedback about Flyboy, by Lucy A. Snyder.
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C. A. Gardner
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Reged: Apr 30 2007
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Great poem! I loved the way you incorporated modern lingo & names, and used such different meanings to your end words so that each repetition seemed fresh. I also admire the subtlety with which you presented this as a futuristic/near modern take on the story of Icarus--only with a more upbeat ending!
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Lucy
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Reged: May 07 2006
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C.A., I'm glad you enjoyed it!
http://www.lucysnyder.com
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