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This thread is for comments about lis pendens, by Mike Allen.
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Definitely a poem that got a reaction from me, I'm not sure what though. I thought the idea was fascinating. I liked the style. It felt like an incantation.
I think I wanted the ending to go someplace different, rather than just reinforcing the message.
I've gone back and re-read it twice already. Nice!
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