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This thread is for comments and feedback about Summoning, by Tim Jones.
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Anonymous
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Thank you for the warning - its a good reminder before I light the candle to anticipate the result. Good ominous build-up. I suspect its deliberately gothic in its separation of the men from the women with their fears. Otherwise I'd ask what about the fear of the men?
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Anonymous
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I suspect its deliberately gothic in its separation of the men from the women
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Yes. That, and the banishment of the servants made it feel like a period piece to me. Nicely evocative, though.
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Tim Jones
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Ah, the ambiguity of language - that line refers to the (male) magicians' fear of women, raher than any fears the women might have. The other interpretation didn't occur to me!
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Tim Jones
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SRT
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I enjoyed the the rhythm and tension you created in the poem with the repetiton of "behind..." And the cautionary spin at the end was a pleasant surprise.
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C McReynolds
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Good Job. Nobody knows for sure and may never know. It way have a positive effect, negative effect, or no effect at all.
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