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This thread is for comments about In Lieu of a Thank You, by Gwynne Garfinkle.
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Ben Crowell
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I enjoyed this one. The voice was well done, and she packed a lot of story into 2000 words.
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Marshall_Perrin
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Yes! This was captivating and touching and wondrous, all at once. Thanks for such a nice little gem of a story.
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RJ Dennis
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Your story had the pulpy feel of these covers http://johncwright.livejournal.com/171782.html except with a nice twist. I like that your idea is "You're kidnapped by a mad scientist for an evil experiment." And your reaction is "Cool!" The workshop side says turn up the pulp factor, really go for the traditional cover art effect, and then the twist will be a TWIST.
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KNB
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Great story... like the themes and the visuals.
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revolutionist
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hehe, yes, I liked this one, castle syndrome. Thanks. :-)
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