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Reged: Feb 16 2004
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This thread is for comments about On the Eyeball Floor, by Tina Connolly.
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KNB
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Reged: Oct 30 2006
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Awesome!
I thought this story was amazing - even if I did think the protagonist was female until he's addressed as "man."
I liked an earlier story "Tell Her" as well...but there's no thread starter for that one.
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Black Smoke
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Reged: Jun 09 2008
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Loc: Tennessee, USA
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An interesting story to be certain, though it did take me awhile to catch onto it being a cyborg factory. I think it did a very good job at telling the story and presents it in an easily accesable form. The main character seems to be nearly oblivious to nearly everything, but that is just a quirk I assume is there to help move along the story. I enjoyed it.
-------------------- I do not regret what I have done, or rather what I refused to do.
~Herman Bausch
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airthrow
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Reged: Jun 21 2008
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Hi, I just registered at this site after reading this story to say that I enjoyed it thoroughly. I found the transition from stable everyday work to a battle for sanity and love completely believable and well-done. More than just good writing, it was very entertaining.
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