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This thread is for comments about Kip, Running, by Genevieve Williams.
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GeorgeWalker
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Reged: Nov 22 2007
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The race was cool, a wild future blend of Portland's zoobombers and free running. I liked the details like the gecko-like grip of Kip's hands and feet, the arms unfolding wings like a flying squirrel. The unrequited love ending seems to fit the story.
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sodadreamer
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Reged: Feb 22 2008
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Cool story. I like the descriptions of the city. love the ending. I wish she had pushed him off the train though!
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