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This thread is for comments about Women Are Ugly, by Eliot Fintushel.
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Tribeless
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Reged: Mar 15 2004
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Loc: New Zealand
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Thank you Eliot. 'Women are Ugly' was certainly the best story I've read on Strange Horizons, and indeed, the best short story I've read, full stop, for a long time. As a bloke, some aspects of that story resonated so well, it was like coming home, or some such feeling (the 'home' of a shared experience with another human being). By this I don't mean that there is some type of misogyny excreting itself from myself, or I don't think so :), to be truthful, although I'd love to hear opinions from women who've read the story, I don't read this story as misogynist at all ... it simply works, for me at least, on an emotional level that 'connects' with my own experience, portraying an element of male/female relationships that lies always below the surface (that love/hate thing of losing self), that I've not experienced any writer come so close to before (other than perhaps Lewis Shiner - whom I wish would get published again).
Also the experimental nature of the prose, the short, fragmented sentence structures nicely imitates the feel of the attention deficit supermen.
I don't feel I've explained myself very well. I guess to better encapsulate my reaction to the story, as a male, I can simply say, '[censored] that was good'. As a wannabe writer, such writing makes me very envious, and hence, a little depressed :) Would that I could ever get that good!
But, as stated, I would love to read reactions to the story from a feminine point of view.
Well done also to the editors who're willing to take the risk of printing such a story as this, in these politically correct times, that could be considered reasonably controversial (albeit, all Eliot is doing is putting on paper a uniquely male experience - which is not actually women hating, indeed, which derives complexly from quite the opposite emotion.)
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Anonymous
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Yeah this is good. "If for some in their youth the ugliness is hidden, it is a case of leaves strewn over compost: soon the wind will scatter them, and the stink will rise." Wicked! Like that style too. This is what I mean about an author's world view taking over the story and making it work. It's an author's unique slant on life that gives a story its kick. You can't learn that in any writing workshop!
Nice job.
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Anonymous
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Dude, you have an amazing writing style. Keep it up. Hopefully you'll end up with a great book. happy times, dood
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Anonymous
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Here's a woman's perspective: This story is just another example of why I quit reading "serious, literary fiction." It depresses the hell out of me. Ugly women? More like, ugly soul.
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