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Reged: Feb 16 2004
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This thread is for comments about My Termen, by Eliot Fintushel.
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JoanneMerriam
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Reged: Oct 07 2004
Posts: 93
Loc: Concord, NH
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It's a shame the forum was down when this story appeared, or I bet it would have gotten a lot of favourable comments.
I loved the idea of this story, and was very taken with the narrator's voice.
-------------------- see how moonlight's sharp music breaks all of your windows
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I'm glad it worked for you.
For me, it was another "I am not the target audience for this piece of literature." I couldn't finish it.
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Alas, I am not in the target audience for this one, either. I found the voice very difficult to follow and the plot too bland near the beginning to get me involved.
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